Citation Issues

NYC vital record

I recently purchased a New York State birth certificate from the Municipal Archives in NYC, in PDF format. It appears that although it is a state certificate that it was originally filed with the New York City Department of Health.

This is the citation I wrote for it but I don't know if I have all the elements in the right order. Also - I feel like if I lead with "New York City" it will be redundant. Hopefully I got this right but would appreciate any feedback on this.

Citing England and Wales Register

Hey,

I'm trying to cite the 1939 England and Wales Register (census replacement but not a census)

In the image below you can see how I've done. I used the Evidence Explained Quick Model (Digital Images International Census U.K)

However, as I'm a beginner and new to all this I just want to check whether I'm doing things correctly from the start. 

So does this look good to you and if not how should I change it or approach it differently?

Question about Electoral Register Citation

I'm struggling to find where in the Evidence Explained book how to cite a Electoral Register. Can't find anywhere in the book where it covers this, I know it must somewhere.

Here is what I have so far.
 

Footnote:

"Midlands, England, Electoral Registers, 1832-1965," database with images, Ancestry (https://www.ancestry.com: downloaded 1 June 2020), database entry for George William Whitehouse; citing "Midlands Historical Data; Solihull, West Midlands.".

Brooklyn Birth Certificate

Good evening,

My mother no longer has her 'original' birth certificate. She has two others, both of which are in my possession and I am having difficulty citing them.

The first one was issued in 1965, I believe she needed it to get married. The original didn't survive, so what I have is a photocopy. Complicating matters is that she was born in Brooklyn, her original birth record was filed in Brooklyn and this certificate was issued by the City of New York.

I have so so many questions...

Church Record at FamilySearch

It seems you are getting your fill of questions from me this week.

This post is related to one that I posted last week in which I had come across an Ancestry database which cited FamilySearch - but I could not find some entries in the database of the same name on FamilySearch. Well - I did find at least one entry and am thinking I should just cite the FamilySearch entry, but I am unsure how to cite it.