I have quite a number of inherited family certificates including the attached marriage certificate of my grandparents. I would love some feedback on my attempt below.
Source List Entry
Grant Family Papers. Privately held by Renee Michelle McLean, New South Wales, Australia.
First Reference Note
Grant-Jones marriage certificate, Sans Souci, New South Wales, citing the marriage of James William Henderson Grant and Hazel Beatrice Jones on 21 November 1936; Grant Family Papers, privately held by Renee Michelle McLean, New South Wales, Australia. This certificate was passed from James William Henderson Grant ( 1909 - 1999 ) to his son Eric Henderson Grant ( 1944 - 2020 ), from whom the current owner inherited it in 2020.
I have not included my street address due to privacy concerns as I’m using this citation on Ancestry.com. Is it acceptable to include my email address instead?
Thank you so much,