I have two death certificates for my grandfather. The first one I ordered in 2018. The second, is the original death certificate issued to my grandmother after the death of my grandfather. I just inherited the document last week.
Just want to be sure that I understand the differences in citing them both. I based these two citations on what I've seen in the book and some discussions here on this site. What I am mostly unsure about is if I need to include the agency in the second example, or is what I have okay? If it's needed, where do I put it so it doesn't appear that I ordered it myself?
City of New York, death certificate no. 4007, Harold Diefenbach (1947); Municipal Archives, New York City; certified copy held by TheCount, New York City, 2018.
Harold Diefenbach, death certificate no. 4007, citing death on 16 February 1947; privately held by TheCount, New York City, NY. This document is the original death certificate provided to Hazel Diefenbach after the death of her husband. It was formerly held by her daughter FM Diefenbach and passed to TheCount, 2020.