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I am in possession of an abstract of my mothers birth certificate she obtained from the state of Pennsylvania in 1972. I am not sure if I have a privately held artifact of merely a vital record of her birth. Of course if it is not considered privately held the citation is incorrect. I have treated it as a privately held document with the following source citation..
Pennsylvania. Department of Health. Birth Certificate. Vital Statistics Office. Harrisburg. birth certificate no. 87995-09 (7 June 1909), Mary Catherine Diethrich, certified copy no. 374003 dated 19 June 1972, passed from Mary Stephen (1909 - 2003), privately held by Ronald Stephen, address withheld, 2015.
I will attempt to provide the document for your review.
Thank You
Ron Stephen
Ron, if you acquired this…
Ron, if you acquired this from your mother, then it is a family artifact. If you obtain it yourself, then it is an officially supplied document that you cite to the office from which you obtained it. Even though an agency identity is printed on the certificate, odds are good (with birth certificates) that that a version issued in 1972 is not the same that the office issues today.
Regarding your citation draft, see EE 2.38 for the basic differences between a reference note (i.e., footnote or endnote) vs. a source-list entry. Your example above is a hybrid of the two. It contains the essential data for a reference note, with provenance. However, each element is in a separate "sentence," as though you were creating a source-list entry. The result is seven separate "sentences" for this one source. As you study the examples at 2.38 (and everywhere else in EE), you will note that
The provenance information that you've patterned after 3.25 is good. Chapter 9 offers a variety of birth certificate examples that also demonstrate the difference between creating a reference note vs. a source-list entry.
Thank you so much for your…
Thank you so much for your help. I see now that I will need to make some corrections in my source citations. As I understand your comments the difference between a privately held document and a supplied document depends on how it was obtained. Anything I myself obtain is not considered a privately holding.
Ron, yes, but let's rephrase…
Ron, yes, but let's rephrase that. The differences we're talking about are these:
versus
With everything we cite, we also identify where the record can be found, unless it is a widely published source that can be found in most libraries. That means:
Ron, I also note that the…
Ron, I also note that the certificate carries a warning at its top: "It is illegal to duplicate this copy by photostat or photography." You might want to delete it from your query.
Thank you for that…
Thank you for that information. I will delete it right away.
Thanks, Ron